--- old.txt	2008-04-07 17:30:01.000000000 +0200
+++ proposed.txt	2008-04-07 17:31:01.000000000 +0200
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 
 
 This is the official `TurboGears <http://www.turbogears.org>`_ 1.0 
-documentation. Feel free to leave comments. If you don't see what you're 
+documentation. If you don't see what you're 
 looking for here, you might want to check the RoughDocs_.
 
 If you're new to TurboGears, you should check out the `20 Minute Wiki`_ 
@@ -300,9 +300,13 @@
 Adding Documentation
 --------------------
 
-You can add your feedback to any document by adding a comment, or you can 
-contribute an article in RoughDocs_. See also `Writing Documentation 
-<DocHelp>`_.
+Many pages are freely editable - feel free to make improvements or contribute 
+an article in RoughDocs_ (see also `Writing Documentation <DocHelp>`_).
 
 
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